Natasha Dillow Feedback

Generally some good information here and quite a good style of presentation but it needs to be broken down into sub pages and linked together.  This long page of information is not the style that the examination board will be looking for.

So break it into smaller pages and link it.  There did not seem to be enough detail at the moment and some more use of articles from external sources will improve this.

Currently it is D/E as it is not the style and detail needed for AS level.